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Song: Fishing Pole Cane Man
Artist: rcpd0715

Acoustic
Salem, Virginia

Home Recording added on: 08/31/2016
  Reviews:    7
Avg. Vote:  3.7/5
Score:        3.00
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Plays:         8

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Please critique my song that I wrote when my father passed away...I never have really sang or played much in front of people, so a little nervous I guess. Just want to get some unbiased feedback on my voice really, lol...be honest though!!




Jesus, I need you
I can't stand on my own
Jesus, I need you
I can't make all alone

My Father died in my arms
I can't explain that pain
How can I move on
I just fall down and pray

Jesus, I need you
I can't stand on my own
Jesus, I need you
I can't make all alone

The river will never be the same
He always tied his Grandkid's hooks
Played his guitar by the fire
While he gave us silly looks

Jesus, I need you
I can't stand on my own
Jesus, I need you
I can't make all alone

Fishing Pole Cane Man
That's what some kids named him
He always had it in his hand
I really miss that man

Jesus, I need you
I can't stand on my own
Jesus, I need you
I can't make all alone

Jesus, I thank you
I'm glad my Dad is there with you
Jesus, I thank you
I'm glad my Dad, he's there with you



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